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Daffodils

Wordsworth’s much-loved poem about a field of golden flowers: similes (lonely as a cloud), the past simple and the present simple together (I saw… / For oft, when on my couch I lie…), -ing participles (fluttering and dancing), and poetic inversion, with Philo, Sophia, Marcos and Demetria.

Sophia
SOPHIA

Tonight’s poem is probably the most famous poem in English about flowers. A man is walking alone by a lake when he suddenly sees thousands of golden daffodils dancing in the wind. And years later, lying on his sofa, he still sees them in his mind.

Demetria
DEMETRIA

I love that. A memory you can keep for ever.

Sophia
SOPHIA

Exactly. And here’s a secret: the poet didn’t see them alone. He was walking with his sister Dorothy, and she wrote about the daffodils in her diary first.

Marcos
MARCOS

So she should get the credit!

Before you listen: the song

Ullswater, the Lake District, 15 April 1802

William Wordsworth (1770–1850) was one of the great Romantic poets, who believed that nature could heal and teach the human heart. He lived most of his life in the Lake District, in the north-west of England, with his sister Dorothy.

On 15 April 1802, William and Dorothy were walking by the lake of Ullswater on a windy day when they came upon a long belt of wild daffodils along the shore. Dorothy described them in her journal that evening: some seemed to rest their heads on the stones, others tossed and reeled and danced. Two years later William wrote the poem, published in 1807, and in 1815 he added the second stanza.

In the poem, the speaker wandered alone and suddenly saw a crowd of daffodils dancing beside the lake. He didn’t realise at the time what a treasure it was; but now, when he lies on his couch, they often flash upon his inward eye, and his heart dances with them.

A beautiful memory is a treasure you can carry anywhere.

I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud

William Wordsworth (1770–1850)

I wandered lonely as a cloud

That floats on high o’er vales and hills,

When all at once I saw a crowd,

A host, of golden daffodils;

Beside the lake, beneath the trees,

Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.

Continuous as the stars that shine

And twinkle on the milky way,

They stretched in never-ending line

Along the margin of a bay:

Ten thousand saw I at a glance,

Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.

The waves beside them danced; but they

Out-did the sparkling waves in glee:

A poet could not but be gay,

In such a jocund company:

I gazed—and gazed—but little thought

What wealth the show to me had brought:

For oft, when on my couch I lie

In vacant or in pensive mood,

They flash upon that inward eye

Which is the bliss of solitude;

And then my heart with pleasure fills,

And dances with the daffodils.

Words in the poem

wandered: walked without a plan

o’er: over

vales: valleys

host: a very large number

fluttering: moving lightly and quickly

continuous: without a break

margin: edge

sprightly: lively

glee: great joy

gay: happy (old meaning)

jocund: merry, cheerful

gazed: looked for a long time

oft: often

couch: sofa

vacant: empty, not thinking

pensive: thoughtful

bliss: perfect happiness

solitude: being alone

Read and listen: then and now

Philo
PHILO

Read the poem. Which stanzas are about the past, and which is about the present? What does the speaker do now when he feels empty?

Sophia
SOPHIA

Then listen to a reading, and answer Section A.

Similes

Marcos
MARCOS

I wandered lonely as a cloud. Continuous as the stars that shine.

Sophia
SOPHIA

A simile compares two things with as or like: (as) lonely as a cloud, like a bird. Poets choose surprising comparisons: a cloud is lonely, flowers are like stars in the Milky Way.

Past simple and present simple

Demetria
DEMETRIA

I wandered… I saw a crowd… I gazed. → For oft, when on my couch I lie, they flash upon that inward eye.

Sophia
SOPHIA

The first three stanzas tell one past event in the past simple. The last stanza uses the present simple for a habit now: oft (= often) + present simple. The poem moves from experience to memory.

-ing participles

Philo
PHILO

Fluttering and dancing in the breeze. Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.

Sophia
SOPHIA

An -ing participle after a noun describes what it is doing: I saw the children playing in the park. Notice see + object + -ing again: I saw daffodils dancing.

Poetic inversion and old words

Marcos
MARCOS

Ten thousand saw I at a glance. (= I saw ten thousand.) A poet could not but be gay. (= could only be happy.)

Sophia
SOPHIA

In poems, the object can come first and the subject and verb change places. could not but + infinitive = had no choice except to. gay here means happy, its old meaning; jocund = merry; oft = often.

Sophia’s comparison: Narcissus and the Song of Songs

Sophia
SOPHIA

Did you know the daffodil is a kind of narcissus? The Greeks say the beautiful youth Narcissus fell in love with his own reflection in a pool, and where he died, a flower grew with its head bent down towards the water. Wordsworth’s daffodils, though, look up and dance.

Philo
PHILO

And the Song of Songs says: the winter is past, the rain is over and gone; the flowers appear on the earth, the time of singing has come. Spring flowers are a promise.

Sophia’s summary

Words and formsUseExample
as + adjective + as / likesimileslonely as a cloud
past simple → present simplean event, then a habitI saw… / When I lie, they flash…
see + object + -ingsomething in progressI saw daffodils dancing.
object + verb + subjectpoetic inversionTen thousand saw I at a glance.
could not but + infinitivehad no choice exceptA poet could not but be gay.

Practice

Listen to the song for Section A, then do the rest. Press “Check my answers” at the end. You can try again as many times as you like.

A · Listen: the song

Listen to the song and choose the best answer.

1. How did the speaker feel at the start?

2. Where were the daffodils?

3. How many did he see “at a glance”?

4. What does he do now, on his couch?

5. Who wrote about the daffodils first?

6. Where did they see the daffodils?

B · Grammar and vocabulary

Write the missing word or words.

7. I wandered lonely a cloud.

8. I saw a crowd of daffodils in the breeze. (dance)

9. Ten thousand I at a glance. (see, inversion)

10. For oft, when on my couch I , they flash upon that inward eye. (lie)

11. A poet could not be gay.

12. I saw the children in the park. (play)

C · Right or wrong?

Is the sentence correct English?

13. “I saw the flowers to dance.”

14. “He wandered lonely as a cloud.”

15. “When I will lie on my couch, I remember them.”

16. “She was as happy as a child.”

Talk and write

Discussion and writing

Picture it. Close your eyes while a partner reads the poem slowly. Then draw or describe what you saw. Compare your pictures.

Discuss. 1. What memory do you return to when you feel empty or bored? 2. Should Dorothy get credit for the poem? 3. Can nature make people happier?

Write (100–120 words). My daffodils. Describe a beautiful sight you remember, first in the past simple, then how you remember it now in the present simple. Use one simile and see + object + -ing.